It is about a girl named.. Wait wait you have to read it first. It was meant to be a true story but I couldn´t think of a intersting real story. Do you like writing? I do.
Bye!
Friday 14 August 2020
StoryTime With Lucy
Hey Bloggers. Its me Lucy. Today I am going to be telling you a story. (WARNING It is not true).
6 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia Ora Lucy!
ReplyDeleteIts me Lily from T3 at Grey Main School.
I REALLY like your story!
I love your imagination it really built up this story.
I really like how it built suspense.
Maybe next time you could add speech marks to tell when the characters are speaking.
But other than that this story was GREAT!
I would love to read a part 2 by the way (Just hinting) :)
Kind regards
-Lily
Hello Lily, Thank you so much for this comment.
DeleteYour comment was so sweet :)
I´ll take the tip
I will think about part two.
Kind Regards
From Lucy
Bello Lucy This is Gabby from T3 at Greymain school!
ReplyDeleteI LOVE your story It was very original and interesting... And omg I love how you built up supence it was sooo creative like lily I also think you should add speech marks to tell when the characters are speaking and also like lily I REALLY want a part two
you have a real good knack for writing, you could be an author some day.
Make a part TWO,
Keep up the good work. UwU
-Gabby :)
Hey Gabby, Lucy here.
DeleteThank you so much for the comment, It was so kind.
Ok I will fix the speech marks :)
I will probaly make a part two
Thanks Again
Kind Regards
From Lucy
Hey Lucy!
ReplyDeleteThis is Nova from Grey Main school!
I really like your story! it is so cool!
I especially like all the mystery going on in the story!
as my friends have already commented and said,
PLEASE MAKE A PART 2!!!!
one thing you could work on is to maybe check your spelling before you post!
From Nova!
Hi Nova, It is Lucy.
DeleteThank you so much for the comment it was so thoughtful.
I will make a part two.
I will re-check the blog post.
Kind Regards
From Lucy :)