239 Waltham Road
Cnr Waltham Road & Byron Street\
Christchurch 8023, New Zealand
15/10/18
To Clip and Climb
I came to Jackson's birthday party with my sister. I thought it was very
fun and safe when I got to the top I was scared to jump down but I went slowly
down. My favorite was the skyscraper because some of the cubes glow up in
different colors like blue and pink. I also liked the Mega big slide my sister went
on number 6 I went on five. I don't like the stepper because you could betune the
gaps. One climbing wall was like the big adult one but smaller and easier to climb.
I don't like the stepper because it goes very high. My second favourite was a clear
climbing wall that you could see through and there are two sides on it me and
my sister went on it and both watch each other while we climbed. I think you
could make another slide because there was a lot of people in line. I like the inside
the squares there is space to put your fingers so you don’t fall off. If you fall of
you go slowey witch is good so you don’t hurt yourself.
fun and safe when I got to the top I was scared to jump down but I went slowly
down. My favorite was the skyscraper because some of the cubes glow up in
different colors like blue and pink. I also liked the Mega big slide my sister went
on number 6 I went on five. I don't like the stepper because you could betune the
gaps. One climbing wall was like the big adult one but smaller and easier to climb.
I don't like the stepper because it goes very high. My second favourite was a clear
climbing wall that you could see through and there are two sides on it me and
my sister went on it and both watch each other while we climbed. I think you
could make another slide because there was a lot of people in line. I like the inside
the squares there is space to put your fingers so you don’t fall off. If you fall of
you go slowey witch is good so you don’t hurt yourself.
From Lucy
Hey Lucy
ReplyDeleteI Love how you put down it goes slowly when it goes down so you don't get hurt:). You can Improve by putting in paragraph
Love Renae:)
Thanks Renae
DeleteKia Ora Lucy, I am Julia from in Rimu.
ReplyDeleteI think it is great that you had such an awesome time at clip 'n climb. Maybe to improve this you could use a more creative website to explain what you did. Apart from that great Job!
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School
kia ora lucy this is alexis from tm1 i really liked the way you'v added in what you think they could build next time I think you could go over and double check your spelling great job
ReplyDeletealexis
thanks alexis
ReplyDeleteDear lucy i have had a look at your letter it is really cool. your letter is really long . maybe next time you could add some more full stops at end of sentense. my question is what is your next letter i would love to see from you.
ReplyDeletekind regards
from Olivia
Thanks for taking time to write this lovley comment
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