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Thursday 27 September 2018

T3W10 Writing

This week we have been practicing using capital letters and full stops. I've made a book on google slides to write and illustrate my story. Please write a comment about my writing. 
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2 comments:

  1. Miss Walters28 September 2018 at 13:10

    Hi Lucy!

    What a lovely story to read, you have included exciting backgrounds and illustrations to make it come alive. I especially loved all the strong words that you used, like shimmering, charming and horror. You got most of your capital letters and full stops in the right places, but next time just double check that you have got them on all the names of your characters :)

    From Miss W

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  2. Anonymous18 October 2018 at 10:20

    Thank you miss walters

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