T3W10 Writing

This week we have been practicing using capital letters and full stops. I've made a book on google slides to write and illustrate my story. Please write a comment about my writing. 

My First Post EVER!

Hi, my name is Lucy and I'm 8 in a half and i'm a year four. My hopes are making arts and crafts and playing in the playground with my friends. I love eating french fries from Mcdonalds. I live in Templeton in my brand new house my family brought. I and my friend Olivia love to play hair dresses. I've been hoping to go on a holiday to Australia because I've never been there before.

I go to Yaldhurst model school with my best friends. I have one little sister and my mum, dad, cat, and my dog.  I go to the park with my mum and my sister on the weekend. I love doing gymnastics like cartwheels and splits. My best friend is Karlie and Olivia. My favorite color is teal and hot pink.